The cool water running slowly over the stones
The soothing sound of the stream
Drip, drip, drip
My name is
Of old Germany
My name is
Personality squeezing out of every corner of myself
My name is
Happiness, intelligence, and laughter
My name is
The warmth I feel when I'm around the people I love
My name is
Unorganized, clumsy, and silly
My name is
As beautiful as the sunrise on a warm beach in the summer
My name is
Common, yet special
My name is
Simplicity in a bottle
My name is
The excitement felt when watching a scary movie
My name is
Caring more about others than myself
My name is
The curiosity of tomorrow
My name is
Tears from getting a bad grade on a test
My name is
An innocent smile
My name is
The pain I've endured
My name is
The strength I've had to overcome it
My name is
Me
My name is
Brooke.
Onomatopoeia
Repetition
Simile
I love how you actually said you name was a brook. Ahah.
ReplyDeleteYour name is chica chica Brooke Peters! Great poem"
ReplyDeleteI like how you have so many different meanings for your names. This poem is great
ReplyDeleteI really like how you compared your name to a brook. That was really cool. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was great. I really liked how you repeated, "My name is."
ReplyDeleteI could have sworn your name was Burke...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I really loved your poem. It perfectly described you. Fan-tast-ic!
I love how you describe yourself through your name. This is very well written. Good job Dad!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said so many different things about your name that made it special, it was good!!
ReplyDeleteBrooke,
ReplyDeleteI like the form of your poem since it had a nice and clear rhythm.
I like the different meanings of your name :)
ReplyDeleteI really loved your poem!! I thought you never got bad grades on your test? 😂
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and Brooke if you had an innocent smile I think that thought disappeared after you posted that picture.
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem, it was amazing! You did a great job uncle Edgar!!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem. It was great.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said your name was simplicity in a bottle. It shows your name is simple but has meaning.
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote about you. I really like the ending it went really well with your poem. Great job!
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